At The Concert

What a wonderful evening! After a boat ride on a cool night, Bob went to a concert — and it’s a blast. The venue is lit up; there’s a laser display show; people are dancing. Being hungry Bob had grabbed a burrito to eat in the stadium. However, before he could bite into it, someone bumped into him, causing it to leap from his hand, somersault through the air, and land on the floor. SQUISH! A dancing woman wearing 2″-heeled ankle boots stepped on the burrito, the guts oozing out as she pressed her weight on it. Bob simply replied, “Crap!”

This post is inspired by a photo prompt for Friday Fictioneers on Due to not yet having figured out all the details of links I wasn’t able to participate formally, but I love my story!


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Christian, freethinker, believer, skeptic, seeker.

One thought on “At The Concert”

  1. Dear Kevin,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Let’s see if I can help you with this link thing. By the way, I urge everyone to please put the photo prompt into your blog page. It is kosher to use it for the challenge. It’s one of the things that links us. The other part of the equation is commenting on other stories. Reciprocation is fun and it will draw traffic to your blog. The linkz list (it’s not too late) is pretty simple. Email me at for further assistance. We have a few things in common, my friend. Good story, too.



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